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You will receive a Picture Book Critique by Award-Winning Author. Whether we are new or ha

With a track record of excellence, I am proud to have received multiple prestigious book awards. 

These accolades serve as a testament to my dedication and the outstanding results I have achieved in shaping characters and refining plots.

If you are interested in receiving a critique, please reach out by email: diana@dedonibooks.com or by filling the contact form on this website.

Rates:

Picture Book Critique up to 1000 words - $50

Chapter Book Critique up to 10000 words - $150

Reach out for custom quote for longer works.

Throughout my career, I have honed my skills in guiding authors towards creating captivating narratives that leave a lasting impact on readers.

 

One of my areas of expertise is character development. I have a keen eye for detail and a deep understanding of what makes fictional individuals come to life. I believe that well-crafted characters are the heart and soul of any story. Through my meticulous analysis and insightful feedback, I help authors shape their characters into three-dimensional beings, ensuring they possess depth, complexity, and relatability. I work closely with writers to refine character arcs, allowing readers to connect with and invest in their journeys.


Plot development is another aspect of storytelling that I specialize in. I have a natural instinct for identifying narrative strengths and weaknesses, and I love helping authors structure their stories in a way that keeps readers engrossed from start to finish. Whether it's mapping out a captivating plotline, refining pacing, and tension, or resolving narrative conflicts, I provide guidance that ensures every twist and turn serves the overall story, creating a seamless and satisfying reading experience. 


Additionally, I understand the importance of stakes within a narrative. The sense of urgency and emotional investment created by high stakes is what keeps readers hooked. I excel at helping authors identify and amplify the stakes in their stories, making sure that readers feel the weight of the characters' choices and the consequences of their actions. By raising the emotional and narrative stakes, I help authors craft impactful and unforgettable storytelling experiences. 
With my passion for storytelling and my sharp editorial instincts, I offer invaluable developmental editing services to authors seeking to elevate their manuscripts. I provide the tools and insights necessary to transform promising manuscripts into exceptional literary works. 


Whether you're a new writer looking to shape your characters and plot or an experienced author aiming to take your storytelling to the next level, I am here to help you bring out the full potential of your manuscript. Together, we can create characters that leap off the page, plots that captivate readers, and stakes that keep them on the edge of their seats. Let's embark on this exciting journey of storytelling and make your manuscript shine.

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